It took mere seconds to relapse into a comatose state; lying unconsciously on a plain white bed with minimal sheets and walls of bleak stones. There were no windows, no sun shining through the bars and shedding warmth into the frigid room. Nothing about the area screamed comfort, a place of safety and recognition. A musky smell wafted into the room through the crude wooden door, seeping through the large cracks caused by the previous inhabitant. Water ran down the stone walls creating mud pits on the floor. The place was rightfully entitled ‘Prison’ and seemed to embody every aspect of the word.
Stale sheets, soaked with urine, sweat and blood crunched
under the girl as she shifted in her sleep. The time that had passed was
unrecognizable due to the lack of ability to see the position of the sun. It
could have been hours, days, or even weeks before she would open her eyes once
again. Her skin used to have a healthy, sun-kissed glow. Now it was pale white
and blotchy from malnutrition, large bruises covering her limbs. Hair that was
once as vibrant as the red of a rose was now matted with dirt and grime,
forever entangled in dreadlocks. Her nails were chewed up and stained with
blood from constantly scratching at the door or wall, trying with no success to
escape her dreaded fate.
The days grew longer and longer as time passed. Nothing
seemed to bring comfort to her no matter how hard she tried. It had not
mattered much anyway. She was in and out of consciousness so much that comfort
was not necessary. It was a rarity that she was awake. By the end of the time,
she was not eating any food or drinking water. She would not smile or grimace, hell
- she barely acknowledged pain from the knives piercing her or the hot irons
branding her skin. Her eyes were void of all emotion having gone a milky blue
due to vision lost. Her face was beyond recognition and one would use daunting
as a way to describe it, but that word did not justify the horror of decay. She
was essentially a walking corpse…had she been alive.
It started about a year ago, the girl living with her
mother and two older brothers. She was a golden girl; she had perfect grades
and was the president of multiple clubs at her school. She was a teacher’s aide
and helped other students in her classes and even offered to remain after
school for extra tutoring. There was nothing that any person could pick out as
a flaw. Deandrah Jay Milton was the girl every other girl wanted to be and the
girl every boy wanted to be with.
The day was setting into twilight and the colors in the
sky mixed together creating a masterpiece of abstract art. Deandrah was walking
along the streets towards her home not but fifteen minutes from the school. She
had earphones in her ears and music playing from her mp3 player, her mind lost
to the lyrics, eyes closed in content. As she reached the corner to turn onto
her street, a pair of hands unexpectedly wrapped around her petite body. One
hand moved to cover her mouth before she could scream while the other remained
around her waist, tugging harshly towards a car stopped on the road.
Her screams were muffled, the noise catching in her
throat and rubbing her vocal chords raw. The person was unrelenting in pulling
her to the car and shoving her into the trunk. With tears in her eyes she
screamed only to have it be cut off by the trunk lid slamming shut effectively
locking her in the small confinement. Deandrah’s hands were trembling as her
body shook with fear. Who were these people? What did they want?
Deandrah banged against the lid while screaming. She knew
they were moving from her body shifting in the trunk or being thrown in the air
from hitting pot holes. After about half an hour she gave up; she lost hope
that someone would hear screaming from the trunk of the car and do something
about it. At that point she let the tears fall freely. What little pride she held
onto after being thrown into the trunk was gone. She did not care if the
kidnappers saw her crying. Perhaps, then maybe they would see that she was
human and had emotions as well. Maybe they would realize that it was a mistake
and take her home.
It
was a fruitless dream.
This is really good. It genuinely creepy. I love it. :)
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